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Title: Paradise, Lost
Author: [livejournal.com profile] elrhiarhodan
Fandom: White Collar
Rating: G
Characters/Pairings: Peter Burke, Neal Caffrey, Mozzie (by reference)
Prompt: #057 - Sun
Spoilers: S3.16 – Judgment Day, Based on promos for S4.01-02
Warnings/Enticements/Triggers: None
Word Count: 300
Summary: Paradise still isn’t all that it’s cracked up to be.

A/N: Written for [livejournal.com profile] penguingal’s prompt “Coming Home” in a recent [livejournal.com profile] slashchat session.

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When Neal ran, he thought his life in New York was lost. That everything he built, everything he made for himself was gone forever. He did have half of a blood-soaked treasure – it was a small consolation. And he had Moz - which made his flight into the unknown bearable.

He should have known better. Particularly when it was Peter Burke he left behind. Peter, beautiful, stalwart, loyal Peter - who put his safety and well-being above his career - hell, above his life, came looking for him – not to bring him home in chains, but to save his life.

The day Peter found him was bright and hot and pretty much like every other day in the paradise. But paradise wasn’t all that it was cracked up to be. Yeah, there was endless pink sand beaches, beautiful women and no one pointing guns at him. But it was boring – he painted enough forgeries to fill a museum – and then some. Honestly - he missed the challenges that working with Peter and the Harvard Crew brought on a daily basis.

Hell, he even missed mortgage fraud.

Somehow, though - Peter wrought his own magic. He had the paperwork and a tracker, if Neal put that black hunk of plastic and technology back on, he could come home - no pain, no penalty. If he didn’t, the FBI was going to be gunning for him, and it would likely end in tears and a lifelong term in prison.

Peter was walking on the beach, admiring the ocean, the sunset and the pretty girls in their tiny bikinis, leaving Neal to make up his mind. But there really wasn’t much of a choice. Paradise - at least this one - was really another name for Hell.

It was time to go home.

FIN

Date: 2012-06-22 05:30 pm (UTC)
embroiderama: (White Collar - Neal tropical)
From: [personal profile] embroiderama
Aw, yes this! Neal needs New York, and he needs Peter. ♥

Date: 2012-06-22 06:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maiac.livejournal.com
This is just what should happen.

I can't imagine Mozzie being happy in Paradise for very long, either. He and Neal would both be bored out of their minds within days.

Date: 2012-06-22 07:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] surreal-44.livejournal.com
Ooh, very nice! :-) I really like this. I hope this is how Neal really feels, and how it all happens and everything. -squishes your fic-

Date: 2012-06-22 09:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] catcrazy5.livejournal.com
Yeah! Happy ending!

Date: 2012-06-22 10:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyrose42.livejournal.com
Short and sweet. No whumpum, no h/c, no angst, no guns,etc,etc,etc.

Date: 2012-06-23 04:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] damietta.livejournal.com
I like that Neal (and Moz) are lost in a lot of ways in paradise. That snipet of Neal getting out of the pool and walking past the forgeries was fascinating and I love how you put voice to that tiny scene.

Date: 2012-06-23 05:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pooh-collector.livejournal.com
Lovely job incorporating what we know about how Neal has been spending his free time into this piece.

Peter will always find Neal, and rescue him from himself. It's inevitable.

Date: 2012-06-23 04:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] daria234.livejournal.com
:) Peter's there to save the day. Love it.

Date: 2012-06-24 02:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] secretsolitaire.livejournal.com
You know things are bad when you miss mortgage fraud. :-)

Date: 2012-06-24 04:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] phantomminuet.livejournal.com
I hope this is the way it goes. Only with a little more UST.

Date: 2012-06-25 09:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ebeneezerdark.livejournal.com
So true... Neal in "paradise" = Bored!Miserable!Neal.

::smooshes Neal and Peter together, and then pushes 'em both onto the first flight back to NYC::

Date: 2012-06-25 04:08 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] ladygray99
Let's hope they both make it home without trouble.

Date: 2012-06-25 04:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyniko.livejournal.com
Nice! :) This is so how Neal is feeling - he's not ready for retirement, nor is Mozzie, as much as he might say otherwise.

Heck, Neal told Peter that back in 3x10!

So, yay! Having Peter come to take Neal back home is just perfect. :)

Date: 2012-06-25 11:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] love-82.livejournal.com
I love this! This is how Neal would feel. He (and Mozzie) would never be happy there for long, even in Paradise.

Here's to Peter and Neal being reunited. Only two more weeks to new episodes. :)

Date: 2012-06-26 08:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aragarna.livejournal.com
Nice ficlet ! I love how you smartly put together the pieces we saw in the promos !
God I can't wait for that season premiere !!

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