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Title: Pulling Strings
Author: [livejournal.com profile] elrhiarhodan
Fandom: White Collar
Prompt: #88 - Weapon
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: Mozzie
Spoilers: Judgment Day
Warnings/Enticements/Triggers: None
Word Count: 300 Exactly
Summary: There’s a reason why Vincent Adler turned out to be such an ineffectual villain – he really wasn’t the man behind the curtain.

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It always shocked Moz that Neal has never put all the pieces together. That after so many years of manipulation, he still hadn’t figured it out. Neal was far too trusting, and even though he might tell the Suit that he doesn’t trust him (and yes, he knew all about that little speech), but Neal really did. Maybe not with the location of his stash, but with everything that was truly important.

Moz took a sip of wine and laughed.

Neal trusted him with all of his hopes and dreams, and he never saw the crash coming. Not the first time, when he was finishing up his prison term and making plans for a life with Kate. Not when he was about to steal the music box. He had warned Neal that his fantasy of a little house with a white picket fence was never going to play out. Hell, didn’t he tell Neal that happily ever after wasn’t for guys like them? But Neal didn’t listen and look what happened.

Garrett Fowler might have led the Suit to Julian Larssen, who gave up Vincent Adler with just the right amount of persuasion. Julian was a crack shot and there was no reason why he should have missed his heart even by two millimeters. Unless he was paid to.

Another sip of wine, another laugh.

They all thought “Project Mentor” was instigated by Adler, who didn’t have enough juice to fill a thimble. Moz thought the name was a rather obvious tell, but Neal and the Suit never connected the dots.

Philip Kramer had been a bit of a wildcard, the éminence grise of D.C. Art Crimes wasn’t going dirty his hands without a good reason. Moz supplied the good reason and then some.

He wasn’t a Machiavellian puppet-master for nothing.

FIN
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Date: 2012-03-06 04:13 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] attackfish
Oh my God, now I will never get this idea out of my head!

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Date: 2012-03-07 01:55 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] leonie_alastair
This works really well. Mozzie as evil mastermind is scarily plausible.

Date: 2012-03-07 03:12 pm (UTC)
twinsarein: (OMGLex)
From: [personal profile] twinsarein
*blinks* Whoa! So that lovable personality is just a cover-up. I can see that. Easily. Kind of scary how much sense that makes. Excellent.

Date: 2012-03-06 05:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] coffeethyme4me.livejournal.com
This is absolutely chilling. Amazing job!!

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Date: 2012-03-06 06:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amy1705fl.livejournal.com
Damn!! That explains everything!!!

Date: 2012-03-06 07:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] riverotter1951.livejournal.com
Wicked cool.

Date: 2012-03-06 08:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sky-at-twilight.livejournal.com
No...! But Awesome.

Date: 2012-03-06 08:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ultracape.livejournal.com
Oooh, evil, evil, evil. But it makes so much sense.

Yeah know, the forces that be blessed Neal with genius, talent, health, devastatingly good looks and then made sure that no matter what his goal, his motivation, his dream, it would be just within reach before being dashed to pieces.

Most people don't have his blessings but at lease we don't have the curses either.

Date: 2012-03-06 11:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] marcelasue.livejournal.com
Wow! Creepy but awesome! Loved it =)

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Date: 2012-03-07 12:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jrosemary.livejournal.com
A very creepy--and scary!--take on Moz! Drat you for making it seem so plausible, lol!

Date: 2012-03-07 12:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] evesgreenleaf (from livejournal.com)
Holy! OMG!

Date: 2012-03-07 01:33 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Wow, a dark Mozzie fic. You don't see too many of these. Great job!!

Date: 2012-03-07 01:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] teaboyfan.livejournal.com
This is all too plausible, but it does leave me thoroughly depressed. So much for USA's Blue Skies. Poor Neal!

Date: 2012-03-07 01:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angstbunny.livejournal.com
This would explain SO MUCH.

Date: 2012-03-07 01:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] daniel-shadow.livejournal.com
Mozzie you son of a bitch.....

Great job on the writing El. :D

Date: 2012-03-07 03:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] secretsolitaire.livejournal.com
Oooh. I could kinda see it! Though I hope we don't actually see it in canon. :-)

Date: 2012-03-07 03:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] isoldam.livejournal.com
The scary thing is that this is so plausible. Loved it!

Date: 2012-03-07 03:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pooh-collector.livejournal.com
The mother of all conspiracy theories in a 300 word nutshell.

Exxxcccelllent!

Date: 2012-03-07 05:03 am (UTC)
ladygray99: (WC100)
From: [personal profile] ladygray99
Evil puppet master Mozzie is just great.

Date: 2012-03-07 06:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pipilj.livejournal.com
Excellent.

Date: 2012-03-07 10:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ebeneezerdark.livejournal.com
Evil!Mastermind!Mozzie!?! ...and now he's finally succeeded in stealing Neal away from Peter? :-(

You're BAD...

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Date: 2012-03-07 10:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vanae.livejournal.com
Ooh, nice one.

Date: 2012-03-07 11:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyrose42.livejournal.com
Glad the writer's block broke. Maybe Neal just doesn't want to believe that nice sweet paranoid etc Mozzie could be so mean, nasty, evil ect Mozzie. And the suit, he follows Neal's lead and beliefs on Moz!

Date: 2012-03-07 10:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] calis-1st.livejournal.com
Wow, that's kind of scary. And well done!
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