I loved the original scene you wrote, so I was excited to see you'd expanded it into an entire fic.

It's such a neat idea. I love Mozzie as Neal's stepfather, and I love Neal as a terrible employee. I could definitely see him taking advantage of his company credit card to get a vacation. I really like that along with getting Peter, Neal finds some direction at the end and is motivated to really do something with his life. Great job!

(And yeah, there's no way this Neal would last more than a few days working under Diana. :P)