"He knew now where he had gone wrong with Neal - with the treasure. Accusing instead of asking." - That's it exactly. I got the impression that in canon it was just ignored that Neal wasn't the only one who had made a mistake so I was very glad to read a fanfiction in which Peter realized the role he played in it. And finally, there is some honesty between them again. I loved the fact that even after Neal had done his lying by omission thing, he still told Peter the whole truth. Speaking of lying by omission, this sentence was such a funny example of that: “Yeah - I may be able to track it down.” Track it down to the space underneath the loose floorboard in my closet.
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- That's it exactly. I got the impression that in canon it was just ignored that Neal wasn't the only one who had made a mistake so I was very glad to read a fanfiction in which Peter realized the role he played in it.
And finally, there is some honesty between them again. I loved the fact that even after Neal had done his lying by omission thing, he still told Peter the whole truth.
Speaking of lying by omission, this sentence was such a funny example of that: “Yeah - I may be able to track it down.” Track it down to the space underneath the loose floorboard in my closet.