First off, on August 4 I wrote a prompt almost exactly like this on Collar Corner though I did it anonymously.
Here it is: (Anonymous) on August 4th, 2011 03:36 pm (local) Neal has hit rock bottom Prompt/Request: Neal has hit rock bottom Characters: Neal, Peter, El, Moz, Keller, anyone else writer needs I would Like: Mozzie, no longer trusting Neal, moves the loot so that he does not know where it is. In the meantime, Keller stalks Elizabeth. He won't stop terrorizing her and keeps stepping it up until or unless Neal turns over the Nazi loot which he now does not have. Peter doesn't believe him and throws Neal in a holding cell until Neal tells him where the loot is so he can save his wife. Neal realizes no one trusts him, no one believes him or in him, they all think he thinks more of the loot than anyone else. He has to prove himself to save Elizabeth and to get back what he treasures most, his friends. But how can he do it, guarded day and night in a cage in the depths of the F.B.I. building?
I Don't Want: Suicide, self harm, Neal crying. Giving up the loot can be part of it but not the whole thing because Peter can't be bought. --------------------- So aside from yelling throughout this that I wrote it first, I was really not surprised about this episode at all. This has happened to me a few time before but not this exactly.
Okay, I think Moz will be back. I think that's a no brainer.
I agree, parachuting from a very high building in New York and no one sees, give me a break.
You know what gets me though, more and more, what they are doing to Peter. The only thing he has been wrong about is accusing Neal of stealing the Nazi loot because he really never did.
Everything else he's been right about and it's as if Neal is gaslighting him. He's always left with that one niggling doubt which always turns out to be true.
Okay, now to the last part, hey guys, mid season cliffy is *always* a red herring, always. Yes, Keller could have kidnapped El but that was made to look like a dream sequence.
This episode was very tense though however, once Keller came into the picture, and we all knew he would, I knew I'd nailed it somewhat.
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Here it is:
(Anonymous) on August 4th, 2011 03:36 pm (local)
Neal has hit rock bottom
Prompt/Request: Neal has hit rock bottom
Characters: Neal, Peter, El, Moz, Keller, anyone else writer needs
I would Like: Mozzie, no longer trusting Neal, moves the loot so that he does not know where it is. In the meantime, Keller stalks Elizabeth. He won't stop terrorizing her and keeps stepping it up until or unless Neal turns over the Nazi loot which he now does not have. Peter doesn't believe him and throws Neal in a holding cell until Neal tells him where the loot is so he can save his wife.
Neal realizes no one trusts him, no one believes him or in him, they all think he thinks more of the loot than anyone else. He has to prove himself to save Elizabeth and to get back what he treasures most, his friends. But how can he do it, guarded day and night in a cage in the depths of the F.B.I. building?
I Don't Want: Suicide, self harm, Neal crying. Giving up the loot can be part of it but not the whole thing because Peter can't be bought.
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So aside from yelling throughout this that I wrote it first, I was really not surprised about this episode at all. This has happened to me a few time before but not this exactly.
Okay, I think Moz will be back. I think that's a no brainer.
I agree, parachuting from a very high building in New York and no one sees, give me a break.
You know what gets me though, more and more, what they are doing to Peter. The only thing he has been wrong about is accusing Neal of stealing the Nazi loot because he really never did.
Everything else he's been right about and it's as if Neal is gaslighting him. He's always left with that one niggling doubt which always turns out to be true.
Okay, now to the last part, hey guys, mid season cliffy is *always* a red herring, always. Yes, Keller could have kidnapped El but that was made to look like a dream sequence.
This episode was very tense though however, once Keller came into the picture, and we all knew he would, I knew I'd nailed it somewhat.